……..Dame. Page have me grinning for a few reasoning.
1. The actions and words of the boss. At ground level seem some what normal for a leader. A”I dont what to loss any of my men”, here some of my own supplies take it just in case, and ect. Because he is a villain a lot of this sounds more like poke and flex. Like the giving the ink make it sound more like he think Isaiah is to weak. Just the way he said thing make me understand why Isaiah is cracking his fist. I would likely be cursing under my breath.
2. Next would be the ink bottles. This page have made me really loving that you are using ink to show power for lorecrafter. Unlike normal mana or Ki winch is normal show as a color light around the person. Why ink can be the same you all so have to throw in the bottle it is in and that where you can add many levels to it. Take boss bottle vs Isaiah bottles. Take Isaiah bottles , pretty normal looking with the ink as well. Then we got the Boss who bottle is much bigger .Not just bigger but even more fancy look. Winch for magic thing all was make me feel a level of power. Then we got the ink it self winch look …let just say if it was a drink it would burn all the way down and make you more cross eye then being kick by a horse. So yeah strong for no better word.
What to bring up Akina ink and her bottles but I feel like I did enough Writtening. So good page all along and thanks for the thoughts.
Ah, the fragile ego…
……..Dame. Page have me grinning for a few reasoning.
1. The actions and words of the boss. At ground level seem some what normal for a leader. A”I dont what to loss any of my men”, here some of my own supplies take it just in case, and ect. Because he is a villain a lot of this sounds more like poke and flex. Like the giving the ink make it sound more like he think Isaiah is to weak. Just the way he said thing make me understand why Isaiah is cracking his fist. I would likely be cursing under my breath.
2. Next would be the ink bottles. This page have made me really loving that you are using ink to show power for lorecrafter. Unlike normal mana or Ki winch is normal show as a color light around the person. Why ink can be the same you all so have to throw in the bottle it is in and that where you can add many levels to it. Take boss bottle vs Isaiah bottles. Take Isaiah bottles , pretty normal looking with the ink as well. Then we got the Boss who bottle is much bigger .Not just bigger but even more fancy look. Winch for magic thing all was make me feel a level of power. Then we got the ink it self winch look …let just say if it was a drink it would burn all the way down and make you more cross eye then being kick by a horse. So yeah strong for no better word.
What to bring up Akina ink and her bottles but I feel like I did enough Writtening. So good page all along and thanks for the thoughts.
Isaiah’s pride won’t let him use it until he has no choice but to cheat. He sees Mordred’s help as an insult to his craft.