I’m sorry, but I find the wording used for Akina’s half to be a bit janky when I read it, or say out loud. I feel the word, “it” should be removed as this seems to make it make sense grammatically.
Mmm, might just be how its read.
‘It’ is referring to the pen mentioned in the green text. To remove ‘it’ would remove what is be referred to – the pen – when you put all three colored sections of text together.
Yeah, after looking at the page and reading everything together instead of each color as its own statement, the message comes together clearly. I saw each colored section of words and read them as separate statements. Combining them smooths over any issues.
I’m sorry, but I find the wording used for Akina’s half to be a bit janky when I read it, or say out loud. I feel the word, “it” should be removed as this seems to make it make sense grammatically.
Mmm, might just be how its read.
‘It’ is referring to the pen mentioned in the green text. To remove ‘it’ would remove what is be referred to – the pen – when you put all three colored sections of text together.
Yeah, after looking at the page and reading everything together instead of each color as its own statement, the message comes together clearly. I saw each colored section of words and read them as separate statements. Combining them smooths over any issues.